Is my story good so far?? DONT STEAL!?

Yes, its really good. As a fellow writer here is some advice: make sure you have a very good plot. Use your surroundings and even where you live and some how make your characters lives and this story flow, expand, and cascade into a story that takes your reader into another world, as if that world could be theirs and seem real. Think of your reader. Decide is this story meant to be for entertainment, have a moral,romance or even mix with some mystery. Do brain storming, free writing,etc.The sky is not the limit to your Imagination.